Critique

Hmm, the critique went I think as I expected. It was more about how to fix/improve it than anything else. Though I was unaware at the clique-ness of the water drop, (though it was actually caramel in my picture) I just wanted to see my technique in realism vs. abstraction. The piece was more of a break piece for me, allowing me to stop working on something so serious and play with charcol again. It was more about process, shapes and marking. I hated the final piece of course, and was upset with the lameness of my effort level on it, but I'm happy to be back working on my children's book.